Sunday, September 03, 2006

CEASE FIRE Video

Here is finally a portion of the CEASE FIRE reading/discussion (it took me a while to figure out how to edit the video to less than 10 minutes so I can upload it to YouTube):



(And I still hate to watch or listen to myself...)

8 comments:

Zanzounito said...

Very nice, yet I can't help but notice, what the heck was behind the woman in the blue?

arch.memory said...

Ah, you mean why she was looking back? People coming in late and standing at the door... Thanks, Zanzoun.

hillz said...

I think u did well.
don't worry few are the people who like to listen or see them selves.
;)

I loved the last seconds were u included the "wahdon" sentence.

_z. said...

Ashraf, I second hilal's comment, not a lot of ppl like to hear and watch themselves... i know I turn red whenever it happens. I don't even like myself in pictures. anyway, I think you did very well, the poem was great, and I liked your reading...

well done my talented friend.

Eve said...

hate watching urself? shou hal 7akeh. kint bitjannin. good work, Ash!

arch.memory said...

Hilal, Ziad, Eve:
Thanks for the positive reinforcement; now I don't feel so bad about it :)

thepoetryman said...

I can solve your dilemna with atleast one of your pleas. Transfer the video into a slideshow leaving the voice track intact and placing pictures instead of the videp. If you desire, that is... It would make your audience less distracted by the darting woman in the background and it would relieve you of not liking to at least watch yourself after yu develop the slidehow with your voice over.

I really enjoyed the poem.

Thank you.

arch.memory said...

Mark, great idea! Thanks; that's what I'll do next time. (And I'll ask you if I can't figure out how :)